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Re: JFF Murphy - Hard Boiled.
Thanks for the review, but I believe that some of you criticism is a bit off. I'm writing this story as if it is the opening chapter to a full-length ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Hey
Hi there, just joined this forum as a way to get some reviews on my work. Hope to enjoy reading and posting stories here. Thanks.
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: The Quest, Prologue and Chapter One
Prolouge: Good way to set the scene. I liked the cigerette idea, it made the woman seem to be elegent yet harsh. the scene was well set and i hope ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: JFF Murphy - Hard Boiled.
This was originally for my GCSE coursework at school but it has developed since then. This is the opening chapter to a dective story. Enjoy. JJF Murphy Hard-boiled. By Frankie ...
Mar 7, 2008